by desertkat
found this story because it's on bennyprofane's favorites list and I'm glad I did! great details, great pacing, great perspectives. loved the choices made here. very bold, very hot.
What the hell? This was one of the least erotic things I've ever read. I'm all for bondage but that was flat out rape.
The fact that no one has commented on this and told you how great this truly is amazes me! BRAVO!
If I was that gal, I would kick Brian in the balls
leave his home and contact a hit man for every
one of those guys. Not to kill but to neuter them!
A great fantasy. Really really hot. Excellent job. Think she could-a had a bunch more orgasms though. The ratio I prefer is 4 to 1.
That was AMAZING! Thank you for sharing it with us, and hey can I just say "More Please!"? One of my favorite fantasies, not that it would ever happen, or be welcome, but a girl can dream right?
That was supposed to be erotic? The last commentator has some strange ideas for a fantasy, as does the writer.
This was a great story as it is a fantasy of many women like me.
While we may not want to experience something like this in real life, it sure is an entertaining thought. Very Nice story!