All Comments on 'The Key Pt. 01-03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Well done!

Yes, please continue with this story.

SubnmauiSubnmauialmost 13 years ago

Your kidding right? Do we want more of this story? Yes please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice Job!!

More Please!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

great read more please

MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
More please!

Great story...very captivating! Please continue with more...much much more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

continue it pls

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
a decent story line so far

but guy...ever hear of spell check.. and the lack of proof reading..makes reading the story laborious and diminishes the story context.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Would it be that hard to get an editor?

SO many mistakes makes reading this mess irritating.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This was Paul's game

He removed the cage any time he wanted to. He jacked off while in the cage. It's a toy for God's sake. This story made my skin crawl.

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