All Comments on 'The Keyholder Pt. 03'

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OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
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So naughty and so nice. If he had trouble making it through the day before she used his cock without him getting release, I'm sure it will be much harder... er, more difficult... the next day.

manto2021manto2021over 3 years ago

this one is a 6 star!! close to perfect! can't wait for next one!

rdoolittlerdoolittleover 3 years ago
Loving it.

Keen, thoughtful insight into chastity.

subrob4usubrob4uover 3 years ago
Exquisite gem

This speaks so much to me as I'm in a relationship quite similar to this. Please do keep writing more...

mletroutmletroutover 3 years ago
The first time,,,

I’ve ever rated a story five stars on this site. I very much enjoy the technical aspects - the narrative tone, the pacing, the clean writing, but it is the relationship between the two main characters that impresses me most.

Finally finding a story that presents a fledgling romance between two very different people that is consensual and based on mutual respect is a real treat. I think both characters are well written and wonderfully complimentary not only to each other, but also to the audience.

I would love to see the story continue, but even if it must end here, I’m quite satisfied and grateful to the author for sharing it with us.

thegentledommethegentledommeover 3 years agoAuthor
Thank You!

I'm glad you are enjoying! :)

thegentledommethegentledommeover 3 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying. I think femdom can be sweet and hot at the same time, even when its delving into some of the darker fantasies. So glad you like it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
so sexy

This is a really wonderfully written story, were you can feel the mutual respect for each other although Joyce is and will be of course the one leading and guiding here. I would love to read more chapters as I'm eager to know how their relation will evolve. I hope with mutual respect and kindness. In many other stories, femdom seems to be equal to rude and unrespectful behavior, which shouldn't be the case.

ArckitusArckitusover 3 years ago
Excellent Work!

I love this romantic, consensual take on femdom; it's very refreshing. (Not to say other, more extreme stuff isn't also enjoyable, but the respectful, safe, sane, and consensual characters you've depicted are a welcome change of pace).

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Will there be more to the story

I am really enjoying this story i was wondering if there would be more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful

I very much hope you continue this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Continue!

Many compliments for your excellent work! Are you going to continue the series?

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsover 3 years ago
Wonderful!

The loving consentual aspect is amazing! 5!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellence!

I absolutely love this series! What an awesome femdom experience. This is what dreams are made of!!! Tremendous anticipation and control.

The gentledomme is excellent author!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Perfect!

Are you going to continue this series?! We are waiting for more!

Norway_1705Norway_1705over 1 year ago

5! Amazing! She's so kind and gentle, and he's so relaxed and calmed by her... maybe we need more gentle femdom in next months... excellent pace, rhytm, words... please more!

Peter4yourgazePeter4yourgazeover 1 year ago

soooooo hot, love the ending

maddictmaddictover 1 year ago

Hard and uncaged, young, and horny, a true challenge for both to maintain their situation

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Really enjoying this.

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