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All Comments on 'The Keyholders: Ch. 01'

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FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 2 years ago

Good so far, it needed to be longer.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

TvAnnabelTvAnnabelabout 2 years ago

Love this story! This is my dream as well to be controlled by a keyholder and being ordered to perform tasks. Cant wait till the next story and the get to know what the task will be.

Xx sissy Annabel

Tv-annabel@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A very promising beginning. I especially like the quick back and forth conversation after the keys were mailed. I hope this story stays as fun as it sounds like it could be.

BradDaddyBradDaddyabout 2 years ago

Well done! This will make a great series!

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