All Comments on 'The Kid'

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dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

"And me, a velveteen rabbit, born on the wrong side of the tracks, born hungry." I have goosebumps. I should have back at work 30 minutes ago but I couldn't put this down. Hauntingly, achingly beautiful. And sad. Sorrowful or just sorrow-filled. Five Stars and following. Wow.

Michrick1Michrick1over 2 years ago

Beautiful story beautifully written. I gave up expecting perfect grammar spelling and punctuation

In this venue long ago. You delivered big time. Your protagonist is selfish, unlovable and sad. Thank you for the beautiful story. A very unexpected gift on a lonely Saturday night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am confused. Did the man in the story lose his lover?

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