All Comments on 'The Kid Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

But so rushed. No preliminaries. No foreplay. No reluctance to be overcome. No slow undressing. No teasing.

Disappointing.

Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very well written

Straight to the point, great descriptions, no typos ~ which can totally ruin a good read

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