by leeanna19
You have done it again, wonderful and so hot a story, can't wait for the next chapters...Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo
Thank you Sabrina. Please checkout Sabrina's stories. Sabrina has over 30 HOT stories on here. I am flattered to get praise from her.
This is a wonderful well written short story. I know you have limited time to write, you should consider writing a chapter at time when you can into a full story. This will allow character development development and a complex plot line. You have talent put it use, you do not have to post a story so often. Just a thought, either way keep writing. 💋
Veronica
P.S. Still hoping that things work out for you.
Very descriptive and succinct story that told very much in a few concise, informative sentences. I like the premise of this story, similar to some that I have written and the sex was explicit enough for me to tent my skirt. Nice little story that I'm sure will have the closet sissies wetting their knickers. Well done Leeanna.