All Comments on 'The Kindest Cookies'

by Rubiq

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Outstanding story, short and sweet! Thank you very much Rubiq, what a beautiful surprise!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Masterful build up of how brother/sister find each out.

So sensual from him noticing boobs to mother pretending nothing was going on. Cosing scene leaves so many possible next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Your first story left me confused. It felt incomplete.

Teacher44Teacher44about 3 years ago

It just stopped. I was looking for a next page button, but there wasn't one.

Omart57Omart57about 3 years ago

Aw, come on, More! Very nice first story, Hope there is more to cum!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wtf where is the sex? You left alot unanswered

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please don’t write short Story can’t get into them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

What's the point of story, where nothing happens? 🤔

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I think that you did a very good job but you need to work on the sex scenes and making the story a little longer

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My name is Rubiq Cran, and I am your guide into the forbidden. My stories are about incest. They are graphic and erotic, but I’ve always felt like the best parts of this subject rely on the characters who are going through it and the situations that arise. If you’re bored of m...