All Comments on 'The King & His Slave'

by Pdogg0130

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balsam moonbalsam moonover 19 years ago
hot

such a short but intense story. You captured the mood in the King's chamber very well but still gave the reader imaginative license to picture for themselves. i hope you'll keep writing.

xoxo

ChilledVodka IIIChilledVodka IIIover 19 years ago
Read about a half of it

And it was pretty all right.

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