All Comments on 'The Kingdom Pt. 01'

Fantastic. Looking forward to the next installment. Perhaps breaking it into smaller pieces would be of benefit.

Hi just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the story, it was well written. The sex, violence, as well as, the background info was well balanced. None of them dominated the other but rather complimented and enhanced each other. There has been a dirth of such stories lately and I'm glad to see one. Looking forward to next part.

Again well done!

This is an incredible first chapter of a hopefully thrilling story. I await your next installment with great enthusiasm.

Great story, look forward to more.

My 2 cents

A very good start. You kept my interest throughout this installment. I like the story line and pace. The characters are well developed. I kept guessing who would end up with who. I hope this is not a one and done. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.

Well done 👍! Keep it coming, this is Literotica after all......

A very good start

Overall the writing is good but the story appears to be meandering. Thanks for sharing this story.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

I really enjoyed the story, can’t wait for the next part.

This needs more chapters pleeeeeeeeze

A very fun read.

Good story!