All Comments on 'The King's Man'

You should put much more effort into grammar and vocabulary. Be more descriptive overall, and choose either formal or casual language. "Balls" and "cock" are informal (casual).

Despite the grammer, i like the concept... this story has the potential for a great series if done right...good luck.. <3

As 1 other commenter said, do check your grammer, though. The story has great potential, and I hope you continue it.

Yup, I’m a sucker for Royal intimacy and I hope this gets a part 2!

not very well thought out.... if you had ever had surgery to your stomach, you would now that just laughing is excrutiating, coughing is dangerous and sex is the farthest thing from your mind...