by LordYazoo
not very well thought out.... if you had ever had surgery to your stomach, you would now that just laughing is excrutiating, coughing is dangerous and sex is the farthest thing from your mind...
As 1 other commenter said, do check your grammer, though. The story has great potential, and I hope you continue it.
Despite the grammer, i like the concept... this story has the potential for a great series if done right...good luck.. <3
You should put much more effort into grammar and vocabulary. Be more descriptive overall, and choose either formal or casual language. "Balls" and "cock" are informal (casual).