All Comments on 'The Kiss'

by Arkfisting

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OvercriticalOvercriticalover 3 years ago
You never know

Sometimes you just have to follow your instinct.

jmcharl1jmcharl1over 3 years ago

Wonderful beginning

That was a perfect 1 page story of a romantic beginning

raraewriterraraewriterover 3 years ago
Passion

You have captured the passion of "that" kiss. Fine work, I will read more of your work.

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I've been writing for years, I have been reading Literotica for years. I wrote "Touch Me" more than 20 years ago. I have been away from the keyboard for a while as I have dealt with life changes. I hope to get back to work on the series soon. "The Swim Team" is a full novel...