All Comments on 'The Kiss'

Brilliant, thoroughly enjoyed it.

Menage a trois - with a few extras thrown in. Quite delightful. Five stars.

Great story, one of the best I have read

Excellent

Only mistake is when you briefly changed Hazel's name.

Thanks Anonymous,

There are a few more errors. I’m correcting them and will publish an edited version soon.

Just 'Hilda' interfered with the image! Otherwise great fun and would have been a 5!

Great story! Loved it but, Eric Clapton ...... Lady in red ..... ?

Well spotted Laphroaig. I meant to refer to Clapton’s song “Wonderful Tonight” which is infinitely better than De Burgh’s Lady in Red. Thanks for the heads up.

What a climax to the original tryst. The dancing got them raved up and further sexual pleasure ensued!

What a blast. It is my dream to copy that three-way!

Very sexy mood you put me in .I enjoyed it immensely!

Thanks so much. Will look for more of their escapades

Superb and so very well written. Excellent. Love your stuff Briterotic.