All Comments on 'The Knowing Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow?!

Please continue

thenotoriousanikathenotoriousanikaalmost 8 years ago

I love this so much and I need to read more so if you can put a new chapter out soon I'll love you even more

emj417emj417almost 8 years ago

He finally snapped...guess what Santos thought others would feel about them, he confirmed. When a man cries on your chest and you know he wants more...well, you give him more.

I wish she had took a chance and told him of her true feelings.

cocosheen211cocosheen211almost 8 years ago
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee for the love of god finish this story pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

wonderful story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
SOOOOOO GOOOOOD!

This is brilliant! Tell me you have other stories! And that you're still working on this gem! It's amazing, you're amazing...I love it!

Trinity71Trinity71almost 8 years ago
Wow

Your writing style is so captivating. Wonderful. I'm in love with these characters.

Hope you'll finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The word is STARED. It isn't starred. Get an editor.

Your typos are ruining this story. Learn to spell!

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