by LittleBrain
This definitely needs to continue. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Another home run with expectations met. I got to say I'm loving the list the mother and son have for one another. It's extremely hot and creates a fun dynamic. It's painfully obvious that the sister will get involved in some way and though I can't say I'm against it I would like to hope that the mother and son still have that special bond that they developed in these last 2 chapters. 5 stars ofc
like this part too
feel like there is more than one more chapter possible.
with now sister discovering them?
include sister?
with Saskia being a "carbon copy", looking like a younger rowan.
there were a couple of sentences about that.
there's a lot more possible here I feel like.
Utilizing the others at the gathering as catalysts is a stroke of genius; I completely didn't see that ... <ahem> ... coming (ha ha). The soup that is the combination of complex emotions from the different characters, atop the meat of the principal conflicts, makes for a delightful stew. The characters are refreshingly credible: this is an amazing story!
The description of the emotional and sexual epiphany of mother and son was beaiutfully constructed. Once they realize and accept the fact that they meet and satisfy each other's every need, they have a chance at a truly happy life.
Well done. Excellent follow thru of original story. Like others have said the next chapter logically would be mother daughter and son threesome. Mmmmm would be soooooo hot. Again you get 10 stars from me.
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