by madetoobey
After a good build-up in previous chapters this chapter seemed a bit flat. Robert finally puts on a bra in the story and it barely rates a sentence? After doing all that work for her Anita rewards Robert by having him wank in front of her? To me it all seems like a bit of a let-down after building anticipation in the previous chapter.
The story line slows down a little here...but I think that you a building up the next chapter to being more exciting! Please continue!
I agree with the other two comments would be good if you can offer more exciting chapters
I think this chapter is plenty exciting as is; it's working to build up to a feminization crescendo of sorts, if I had to guess. Looking forward to more!
It was really exciting to hear it was a dream come true. I’ve always wanted to dress up and go in public