All Comments on 'The Lad in the Lingerie Shop Ch. 07'

a voyage of discovery. all of our dreams. i wish i could meet a woman like her!

When back in his flat. Robert reflected on the day and realised with embarrasment and distress just how low he had sunk. Since stopping his citilopram medication he'd again started humiliating himself and allowing other people to again control his life. It was a familar story and he felt the dark clouds of depression circling in his mind. Better to end it all now, he opened the window and jumped into the cool night air from the 10th floor, the pain would finally stop.

your story is getting boring it was better before you had the daughter take over him maybe you can it bACK

Shame about the drinking Pee ... that took the level down, and to be fair most readers would not like that much. It made me feel sick anyway. Before that the story was pretty good and almost believable. xx

it's been a fair start

but it got a much extreme at the end, she acting like a man hating bitch

i would have loved to have a female take me under her hem except for the water sports

robert needs to have a talk to find out what type of relationship she wants or just to turn a straight guy gay

and he needs to find out what he really wants

for me it would become a lesbian that doesnt want anything to do with a penis except my own or a strap on from my female lover

Chastity!

a) Drinking pee - not everyone's cup of tea, but it's almost as strong a symbol of submission that Robert can perform.

b) Chastity. It's on thes way.(Next chapter which I'm working on at moment) and forms a central part of the story, as a key indicator of Robert's absolute sissy persona.

mmmm please continue, loved it all!

It takes a lot to write a story that everyone likes and only a moment to criticize someone’s effort. As you talk about “Manning up” or whatever other advice you have, it’s ironic that you do so anonymously. While you might not like the idea of drinking piss, you can bet Robert dislikes the idea of eating his own cum more. I doubt that fact will go unexploited in future installments.

This was well written and sets up further humiliating examples of submission. I’d hate to try to sway your creative process, but the idea of Roberta getting caught at work excites me.

Thank you for the story.

First chapters were great. This one just went downhill. Nothing to be turned on about. And water games, really?

Wish I was Robert! :)

I loved the 2 options he had: drink his own cum or suck the pee out of Anita'a panties and drink a glass of her pee. I think he made the right choice.

my real name is robert but my mom call me roberta

Yes

my mistress did it to me......