All Comments on 'The Ladies Who Lunch Pt. 01'

You implied the woman telling the story was from the midwestern part of the states and spoke in that vernacular. I call bullshit. I've spent over 70 years living in the mid-west and no one, absolutely no one, speaks in the dialogue you've presented. By the way, when did the 40's become 'mature'? It could have been a 4, instead it was 2.

Every couple should swap at least once.

Enjoyable little tale with few errors, though ‘non plussed’ means the opposite of the way you used it, which was confusing.

Well down, great story. Waiting for part two. 5*

You have a pleasing style. And the setup is good for a string of personal narratives. Go for it!

***Thanks for the read.