All Comments on 'The Lady at the Bus Stop'

The boundaries of age? In my book, there is none. If Nick and Carol truly love each other, that’s all that matters!

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Great story - realistically told so that the improbable was made quite likely. 5*

I became disinterested with your demeaning the appearance of the lady and boasting of your opulence. Maybe you created a good story thereafter, but I don't care!

It is the story that I wish I had written, or even starred in! Will admit that I was hoping for that scene of them having sex in the bus stop itself. 5+ for me! Good job and hope to read more.from.you

Really hot and realistic story. 5 stars and thank you for a good read

Great story, Nick and Carol should go for it, you only get one life. Let them be happy. 5*

I was in a similar relationship a couple of times. Neither was ever going to last, but they were great and unforgettable experiences that I'll not regret.

I suppose you grab it while you can, in essence.

Anyway, that was extremely well written and enjoyable, and I thank you for writing it.

Best regards

Simon

What an idiotic comment from bbaron2274. The lady's appearance and the wealth gap are both perfectly justified in the context of the story, which he might have realized if he'd bothered to finish it.

Well done Sylviafan. Five stars.

Absolutely brilliant.

They do not seem the couple to invite others into their idyll, but you never know about people!

Loved the story. I do think you overplayed ugly. I would have liked it better to tell how beautiful the woman had become. In real make-up and dress improves a woman.

I have been married two times to women over 15 years my senior . Unfortunately both have died but your story reflex’s how I loved them both. Many thanks for writing about this type of situation,

A very hot and sexy story, well written.

The sex between them was fantastic

Excellent, well written and engaging, five stars. I liked the way you used Carol’s stifling marriage and her subsequent unfulfilled potential as a central theme to the story. Your description of her felt real, it was easy to see why Nick was so smitten. The only slight negative for me is your use of American English when referring to ‘garter belt’ and ‘pantyhose’ instead of ‘suspender belt’ and ‘tights.’ I enjoyed it though and I’ll be delving into your back catalogue of stories.

Add shaving her or paying for a Brazilian wax. Buy her some high end lingerie. Love it 5 stars

Best story I have read on here in ages. Love the build up and the happy ending. Well done

This story was wonderful, exciting, hot, age is a number, who cares the difference as long as you both are happy.

Such a sweet, wonderfully written story. Plausible, romantic, and one of the best on this whole site!

Beautiful story enjoyed every word. So happy that it seems normal every day people can find true and deep love not matter what walk of life the come from

This is a great story! Great job! Really well written, really believable, and tells a story of two ordinary people in a really lovely way.

And it is British and written by somebody who is clearly British! It is great to see a good standard of writing, which I’m afraid is not often done on this site.

Please ignore the anonymous comment. What is wrong with a woman having a hairy pussy? I really get annoyed by what appears to be a largely American fan of hairless vaginas! Having a hairy pussy is the natural look – it is lovely getting hair between your teeth! Please keep on writing with hairy pussy, and please tell Carol how lovely her hairy pussy is!

Love is there when you least expect it!

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I was mildly interested from the summary but I couldn’t stop once I started…..it was so good…. Five stars from me

VERY WELL WRITTEN, VERY WELL! I DO HOPE YOU WILL FIND AN AVENUE TO CONTINUE WITH THIS LOVE STORY. IGNORE THE COMMENTS OF OTHERS ABOUT THE AGE DIFFERENCE, TAKE LOVE WHERE AND HOW YOU CAN FIND IT.

YOU MENTIONED THAT YOU TOOK HER SHOPPING FOR NEW CLOTHES TO FIT HER NEW POSITION IN THE WORKPLACE, HOW ABOUT SOME SEXY LINGERIE ADDED TO THE MIX? GOOD LUCK, I WILL LOOK FORWARD WITH GREAT ANTICIPATION TO A NEXT CHAPTER.

If you really love someone age shouldn’t be a problem live everyday to the

full life is to short enjoy each other to the fullest 💚💚

Great story , being from the UK too, stories from the UK have an extra appeal. What to do? Marry her, you fool! There's a seventeen year age gap between me and my wife and at 78 her blow jobs are amazing! I wish I'd dated older women earlier in my life! So unless you want to stop having the best sex of your life...

All hypothetical of course;-)

One of best written pieces of work I have read in a long time. Sweet, readable and with great empathy. Well done 5*.

Great story, really well written with believable characters and plot. Thanks for sharing it.

people find each other for a reason---call it fate if you will, You met because you were supposed to meet. you changed each other's lives. never look back and never regret it. i have no doubt she ever will regret this. as far as ugly-sex, you're attracted to HER --everything about her . she turned you on, you turned her on . if that is ugly-sex, i'll take it every day of the week. how many beauty queens are there really? all the drama that goes with that maybe? shallow and vain? you are a very lucky man. thinking of Carol as a total woman makes me hard

I needed a British to American dictionary to get through it but I liked it a lot.

4 Stars

Best erotic story iv read in a long time

Marry her you idiot!!!

Bus stations train stations airports etc perfect places for horny people to meet and fall for each other. Never say sorry for the relationship with Carol she is ravishing and hot 😜😜😜😜 Even if you worry that as your marriage would attract problems , you are in a marriage situation right now so you two can call each other husband and wife as it reflects your reality anyway 😉😉 Take her overseas and worship her . Age difference is not a disadvantage . It enhances the sex and pleasure in the right situation. Whether the man is older or the woman is older , does not matter if the chemistry is there .

Great story cant wait for next chapter 👍👍👍

Shut up, keep going and never, EVER FAIL TO APPRECIATE THE RESPECT SHE IS SHOWING YOU, AND THAT YOU HAD DAMMED WELL BE SHOWING HER, 24/7. And as far as the rest of the World, screw'em. It's none of their business. You 2 have a wonderful relationship going, sex aside, and the how you 2 came to be where you are is your business and no one else's.

Well written and it kept my interest all the way.

As to the age difference, I had a 40 year relationship with a woman who was 9 years older than me. It only ended when she died aged 85.

After several years on my own I was contacted by a woman who is 23 years younger than me and we have been together for 3 years and plan to marry soon.

Pure erotica... this story was a real turn on for me. I take my hat off to your ability to arouse me as you did, that requires a special ability. I even felt excitement and a sense of naughtiness as I read it. will definitely read it again. Thanks for sharing...!

Don't know about ugly-sexy but older women can be a real turn-on. Well written, and erotic. I wonder where they'll go in life?

Great writing and story ... as always with Sylviafan. I wish I could give you more than 5 stars. It's a lovely and erotic story, quite credible. I still think there was a proper ending ... leaving us with questions about couples having marked differences in age. WELL DONE !

UGLY - SEXY. ? ? ?

vivid sensations, excellent writing 5/5

Marry that wonderful woman RIGHT FUCKING NOW Nick you moron! And cherish her until her dying breath. It's rare that anyone finds real true love and it seems these two have. So screw everything else and just enjoy the rare incredible gift. If children is an issue, adoption hello? The rest are just trivial details. I would sacrifice everything to find a woman like that, regardless if she's 10, 15, or 20 years my senior. Who the fuck cares about the age if you feel love and a deep connection with someone? Only the cynical jaded people who wouldn't understand love if it smacked them with a 2x4, that's who!

Great story!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful....stop the "ugly-sexy"...sounds like she is a beautiful person.