by Dirty_Old_Pervert
Hi. I don't really know why this story got my attention but I really like it even if it is at the moment the typical african slavery. The introduction into the story was done nicely but a also a bit too unbelievable. An european government which will let a sports team fall into slavery and can not do ANYTHING is a bit over the top.
The character introduction was done nicely. Also the process of the story. But I hope the story does not continue as predictable as the impression I got from the last scene.