by Sylviafan
Sometimes you forget you are on a literotica site ,this was one of them well done
absolutly fantastic, my wife was older when we first met, n so what love is love, eh?
Really nice! I felt I could know these people - and I can't say better than that! :)
Good characters, well-developed & believable - she's not a glamour queen, he's no stud; just real people. I like that. :) Good pace to the story-line, nice ending.
I never give a 5 to any story, but you have written the one that broke that rule. Congratulations
This is how intergenerational love is supposed to be. If only I could have done this with my older woman all those years ago..... 5 stars.
bleh.... could have made her a few years younger so she could have got pregnant.
Great story. How come I never met a hot woman like that when I played golf!
Jolly well done! A most enjoyable read, which is exceptionally well-written with an interesting plot twist and excellent character development. Perhaps just as important for an erotica story, the sexual interplay was very hot. All in all, I say you did an excellent job overall, and clearly deserving of a five-star rating. I do wish I could have given a higher one. Do keep up the good work!
Very nicely done! A difficult subject handled very well indeed. Worthy of 5*. I guess it would have been a stretch to have them adopt a child to complete her fantasy and give her final fulfillment. Aandl women do have children in their late 40's so the author could have adjusted their relative ages a bit and made the fantasy complete. But I guess that would have stretched the credibility of the tale. On the other hand, anything is OK in Fantasyland. Thanks for a pleasant ride.
Fantastic, well done, as an Englishman living in Yorkshire, it was fantastic to read and made me think of my first love, we had the same age gap as these two had.
Great read, well written. Will need to go back and read your other stories.
Well done, I was glad that you didn't throw in some unbelievable hidden wealth at the last few moments.
***** Very enjoyable read. You tell a very entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.
That was a sweet story, and thank you so much for the wonderful, flawless, proper, spelling!
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Your use of the English language is as delicious as the story you told. Thank you for sharing!
Lovely and well written with great descriptive sections. Brought back memories of a girl friend who was also small breasted but, like Sandra, had really long nipples when roused. She also had a great bush.
Very enjoyable read, I really enjoyed getting to know your characters. I always regret when the story comes to an end as I hate saying goodbye to the characters.
Enjoyed it, I was in a similar situation but sadly. It turned toxic as time went on due to jeliousy, tho I never stepped out of line in 39 year though I spent the last 10 celibate,. I suppose. that is the price one ends up paying. Keep up with writing.
What a wonderful writer this man his. I hate it when his wonderful stories end. Alwaysready71 summed it up perfectly, I also hate saying goodbye to his character's. In every story he develops them so well. Nobody writes sex better than him, it's how I would want it in real life. I am recently married my husband is good but not quite at this standard yet. Thank you.
Wonderful - maybe the best character development in all of Lit. Such a happy story - made me cry,
Yes, one of the best stories I’ve read here, wonderful ending. Worthy of my five stars.
A beautiful love story.
I had a 40 year relationship with a woman who was 9 years older than me.
It only ended when she died 8 years ago aged 85.
EXCELLENT!! Nothing better than smaller breasted women, there a lot more sensitive!!
Like this a lot-nice characters, LOVE your gave her a lush russet muffin...so many shaved/bald these days, and she was down for rump rogering at 51...unexpected, a treat for them both!
and also a fan of small boobs