All Comments on 'The Lady Next Door Ch. 01'

Loved the build up and the way it’s moving. First the tease then the sex. Can’t wait for chapter 2.

i enjoy the evolution. Keep it up!

A loverly story but how will it end roll on Th next time

Loved the plot line, a well crafted story, am looking forward to reading more

What a beautiful story.

Beautifully done, well written, well-defined characters. super dialogue, excellent descriptions of the physical environment, and delayed, delayed, delayed the joining of two bodies of different ages. The sex scene fits both characters well and leads to the next chapter. I'm waiting.

Simply beautiful!

superb story, love to hear more as i;m sure there is more excitement to come

Beautiful story so DON’T ruin it with adding ANAL to the story line.

That is not needed in a GREAT story like this that is so well written.

It was a very well written story! loved it!

This has to be a love affair that continues. No need for two houses. Their love must go on.

Until he finds out what happens to a female body after menopause and that suddenly that age gap will become increasingly disappointing over time. This relationship isn't going to have a happy ending.

Excellent storytelling and writing. Women in their 50s and older can be so sexually alluring. Looking forward to seeing you develop this further.

Excellent story. Well written. I look forward to the next installment.

This was a well-crafted and enjoyable story. Although some might have "credibility issues" with the age gap, the way you have developed the characters and the dialogue , in my opinion, seemed quite real. It was a very satisfying story and I look forward to your next installment also!

Excellent in every way. As its written in UK English it seems so real.

More please.

*****Excellent piece of writing your description of the countryside and the surrounding areas made this a great read. What a great storyline. Thanks for sharing.

A blown lightbulb won't trip a breaker. A breaker trips because too much current is going through it, when a lightbulb blows, the current *stops* flowing.

Loved the story and it’s slow development. Seems perfectly possible despite the significant age and generational differences. Extremely erotic and well worth the read. I am very much looking forward to new chapters to see how this love affair ends. Well done.

To correct Anonymous, above, a lightbub blowing can trip a circuit breaker if the filament falls against the metal cap. It's rare, but by no means unknown.

An electrician

Well done. Good character development and well paced. Thank you.

LWlurker

Anxious for part 2.

Superb love story, excellently paced.

Every thing an erotic story should be a slow build and a glorious culmination. excellent and believable.

You definitely have a 'type' middle aged, slender with small breasts and red nail polish with garters. Good story

Great story.

I am sure this is the best story I've read on Literotica. Most realistic and well punctuated. Thank you so m.uch

Great starting story for this series, wonderfully written. Good story pace and fantastic character development. Again, love the fact your mature character is a natural woman. Thank you for sharing. 5⭐

Nice stuff, written with thought, good descriptions nice character set.

Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!