by Sylviafan
Dr beulahthebrit; Brilliant story, well developed and really sexy, shame it's over after just two episodes. However, I for one will read any other submissions of yours. 5 stars.
*****The storyline just kept getting better and better. Great sex and a great ending just a great read!! Thanks for sharing.
A beautiful tale. Well constructed. A sometimes difficult matter handled sensitively and with accuracy and style. congratulations.
An unusual but nice story. Well written. But why did you have to ruin it with anal?
Great story very well written, pleasure, excitement and fulfilment for all, Thank you.
Very well written - with believable character development. The only downside was the realization that the very large age gap would likely cause things to end sadly, if not badly. By the time he was in his early 60’s, - hopefully still capable of, and interested in, the “physical relationship” - she would have been in her mid nineties. The essence of the story - with just a 15 to 20 year gap - could have been retained — with a happier ending.
I do wonder about little Zoe’s future. She is sure to catch on the the fact that her dad and her grandma are sleeping together - while her (essentially sexless) mom is sidelined. I suspect Zoe will have more hang ups than Alice ever had —— but then whoever comes along to straighten her out may get the ride of his life.
Thanks for another sensual experience. I love your writing, pace and plot development. I have a fixation on older women too, so that helps my mental image of the tale.
Another great series. Fantastic story, although that was some curveball thrown in by Stephanie. All was tied together masterfully. Thank you for sharing. 5⭐
I almost didn’t read this story. I’m glad I did. I love it when everything works out. Thanks.