All Comments on 'The Lady Next Door Pt. 01'

great when is part 2

I loved this story

Good premise.

But all of the sex is too automatic. Too mechanical. Hetero and lesbian.

No description of either of two pussies. Shaved? Hairy? Manicured?

Needed A LOT more in the way of preliminaries.

Needed Dominique teaching him how to touch her. Where. When.

Needed Dominique asking him, once he admitted masturbating to thoughts of her, how often? What did he imagine while masturbating to her? Before she moved in, did he masturbate to porn? What kind?

Change to lesbian activity was much too abrupt.

Four stars.

Beautiful story. Keep writing!