by Sailor1
Wonderful. Made me cry, but wonderful nonetheless. I liked the story development, and the tasteful way you handled the bedroom scene. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Holy crap I cried and that was so not what i was wxpecting when I started to read this. Very well written and hell -- BRAVO for a job well done
A wonderfully developed romance. The presentation was soft and classy. The language and interactions were refreshingly old fashioned and polite. The whole story was written with a great deal of skill and displays charm reminicent of another century. Well done.
Thank You for a wonderful story of love found fulfilled and lost! I still think it is better to have loved and lost, than not loved at all!
Great writing!
Thanks
John
Erotic literature doesn't have to describe how well either of the genders is sexually endowed. So it is with this story. I enjoyed it immensely.
Herzlichen Dank! Extraordinarily well done, with depth and thoughtful descriptions of feelings and fears. I agree, she is a most delightful tyoung lady. Nádherně napsaný s krásou a citem. Большое спасибо.
It looks like a cheap repeat of other comments, but there is just no better word to describe this story.
What a beautifully written story. In my opinion, the word crafting was exquisite. The ending was a bit of a letdown for me, but then, that's life. Not as we wish it were, but as it is. My thanks to the author for a great story.