by Sailor1
What a beautifully written story. In my opinion, the word crafting was exquisite. The ending was a bit of a letdown for me, but then, that's life. Not as we wish it were, but as it is. My thanks to the author for a great story.
It looks like a cheap repeat of other comments, but there is just no better word to describe this story.
Herzlichen Dank! Extraordinarily well done, with depth and thoughtful descriptions of feelings and fears. I agree, she is a most delightful tyoung lady. Nádherně napsaný s krásou a citem. Большое спасибо.
Erotic literature doesn't have to describe how well either of the genders is sexually endowed. So it is with this story. I enjoyed it immensely.
Thank You for a wonderful story of love found fulfilled and lost! I still think it is better to have loved and lost, than not loved at all!
Great writing!
Thanks
John
A wonderfully developed romance. The presentation was soft and classy. The language and interactions were refreshingly old fashioned and polite. The whole story was written with a great deal of skill and displays charm reminicent of another century. Well done.
Holy crap I cried and that was so not what i was wxpecting when I started to read this. Very well written and hell -- BRAVO for a job well done
Wonderful. Made me cry, but wonderful nonetheless. I liked the story development, and the tasteful way you handled the bedroom scene. I look forward to reading more of your work.