All Comments on 'The Lake House Pt. 02 - Kelly'

Great work! I really like your storytelling and thoroughly enjoyed "My Aunt's Gift" and "The Lake House"-Series so far.

Hope you're continuing this story soon.

PS: Maybe Aunty can gets back into the action.

Please continue.

Thank you for writing this great follow up story. One minor editing tip - you seem to use your when you should use you're. I know sometimes spell check will give you the wrong one, but things like that do detract from your great storytelling ability. For example

It's your bike (your in this case is possessive) versus

You're a good writer. An easy way to remember is if the formal way to say it is "you are" then the correct spelling is you're. Cheers!

Good work. I want more!

This sounds to me as if this story is crying out for a follow up chapter. It is a brilliant story you have emotions as well as lust you have potential love all bustling to be preeminent in a relationship that could be vital or disastrous I shall add you into my favourites to ensure of an alert when or if you continue.

This story is amazing I hope to read more of it