All Comments on 'The Landlord Ch. 01'

I wonder if his sister will visit to be special renter also. Hahah

How long before he loses the building?

The story has potential. I look forward to future chapters.

You (and your character) should have actually Googled the eviction process. Even though he's not actually going to end up evicting anybody, it would have made the story a bit more believable.

Also, it sounds like he was charging a fixed rate per person instead of per apartment. Even hotels don't charge as much for the second guest in the room as the first and apartments are rarely rented in that manner.

Finally, the rent alternatives that his uncle were getting weren't believable in scope. If he's going to basically pay each of these girls $1,000 a month, for a monthly titty flash or watch two fully dressed lesbians make out once, especially since he was paying each of them, so he was paying $2,000 to watch something you can see in PG-13 movie. Even if he was having sex each month with Mrs Howard, that would make her a very high priced prostitute. He could afford to hire quite a few reasonably priced hookers if he actually collected the rent.

so predictable, so boring ...

Oh this is a really good story, it’s desperate for part 2 and 3… it’s just that bit different than the normal, nice character descriptions so far, can’t wait for part 2.

I could have swarn I put a comment on this just an hour ago, but it’s gone, strange.

Still I like this, has to look when it was posted and as it’s only been a few days, to early for part 2 today, but I really hope you post it soon.

Hey! Nice start, in the future longer and more detailed sex scenes would be great

Good premise.

But sex is boring. No tension. No teasing.

Smd, at least twice you wrote "mam". The word is MA'AM.

Three stars.

Great premise. Looking forward to how the MILF is going to satisfy the rent.

Very good story. Need a part 2 soon.

I was hoping this series would continue. Will there be a chapter 2?

Would love a second chapter.