All Comments on 'The Lascivious Librarian'

by themodernsappho

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More of their story please!

MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

Fun, very intense, ravenous sex scene — more than a seduction, and certainly well beyond a causal dalliance. Storyline has real potential for character development. Curious minor aside: DD breasts; why not simply large or … . Cup sizes detract. Liked this piece; hope you continue to share.

lexdw32lexdw32over 1 year ago

A great first effort! Please keep writing.

LemilyLemilyover 1 year ago

Thank you. Very arousing. Please write more. Add in a description of what all your senses experience and it would be on an even higher level.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really enjoyed the story. I would have liked more detail in the clothing. I really look forward to seeing if Diana has any submissiveness in her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was very enjoyable to read! A lovely story, fitting your username, and with such a relatable main character! I am looking forwards to reading more from you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Write some more!!! Great start

Arlo96Arlo96over 1 year ago

For this being your first submission, something tells me this isn’t the first story you have put to pen. Very nice. Look forward to future submissions.

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