by themodernsappho
Fun, very intense, ravenous sex scene — more than a seduction, and certainly well beyond a causal dalliance. Storyline has real potential for character development. Curious minor aside: DD breasts; why not simply large or … . Cup sizes detract. Liked this piece; hope you continue to share.
Thank you. Very arousing. Please write more. Add in a description of what all your senses experience and it would be on an even higher level.
Really enjoyed the story. I would have liked more detail in the clothing. I really look forward to seeing if Diana has any submissiveness in her.
This was very enjoyable to read! A lovely story, fitting your username, and with such a relatable main character! I am looking forwards to reading more from you
For this being your first submission, something tells me this isn’t the first story you have put to pen. Very nice. Look forward to future submissions.