All Comments on 'The Last Boy Scout Ch. 04'

Great story. Hope to see more of his back story and moving forward from this one.

I'm extremely glad I stumbled across this series. Your story telling and everything along with it is simply excellent and entertaining. Five stars aren't enough.

5 Stars and The teacher and Lisa and Heather and Julie and Teri all end up with Child 2 months later .

5 Stars on a Great Story . I hope that everyone likes it as much as I did . I wanted him to end up with the great Teacher . The author sis a great job with the Characters.

This is one of my fav, all-time stories. The sex was great, but even more so was the intimacy shared, and the authenticity, which gave everyone the vehicle to become closer. This was pretty hot.

Fantastic storey, I hope you continue with these characters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Huh... a harem indeed. I'm not sure how he can keep all of his fidelity promises with teacher around. Tough job having to service allow those demanding little that's, but hey... someone has to do it.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

So well written and I also would love to read more about these people!

Great story. Made me fall in love with the teacher tag again. Hope you write more of these characters.

great story can't wait for more.

Great storyline; should be the starter for many spin-off story’s please expand on this base. I want to follow all the different relationships forward, Please!

This whole series is excellent. I think its your best work.I lke all of the characters.

Love this series. A lot of fun to read.

Great 4 part story. great characterizations. beleivable

great story. loved every minute of it

Ooh, this was such a fun read and quite a turn on. The characters were all so alive and gave substance to the story. Each of the girls were also so believable but the intimacy was so descriptive and moving. A movie could not do it justice, the mental picture far more memorable and vivid...!

Perfect!

Thank you for fulfilling my fantasy.

When does Teri go all the way?

Excellent!

Fun Series!

I loved "The Last Boy Scout" series. I can not wait to read about the rest of Alex's adventures.

This story and the characters are amazing. I can't wait for more.

Please don't tell me John gets Teris cherry? Haha. Great story, loved it thank you

Such a great series, I really enjoyed it and would love to read more about Alex, Miss Shannon, John, Terri and even how he handles going back to reality/school with two gorgeous girlfriends and a teacher sidepiece 😇 Love your stories, especially the longer ones like these. Thanks for sharing!

Sequel will be - how does Alex handle the real world harim; Julie, Lisa, Shannon, Teri, with potential adds of Heather & Dominique. Will they all live in Shannon's house in her king size bed? What will mom say?

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What was the after critique of the Outdoor Club;s learning experience be? Who did not pull there weight and how much would Alex need to lecture/teach basic Boy Scouting 101 for the next camp out. Did Alex ever get his T- shirts back?

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Being a 'Life' Boy Scout/Explorer it was interesting but nothing not learned by 1st Class Scout. Missing many of the finer points of WET-survival camping! Glad to see how he filled the pots to boil! But keeping a fire going in down pours is not just stoking it, finding semi-dry wood (as much as they burned) is a REAL challenge. Actually, the first day should have had an "all hands" wood hunt - to tarp it!

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I was miffed at Alex for not telling Dr & Shannon about the danger of tent placements/flooding. Obvious to all Alex was an experienced woodsman and the teachers did not use him until all was wet. Who was the designated First Aid person? Who was the designated latrine person? 22 club campers and no organization - chaperoned by camping ignorant teachers - not hardly?

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2nd read, Hooyah.... But what a fantasy - actually, too much sex - got boring.

Great Characters and a 5 Star rating from Me . I hope you do another story on these people maybe have Max be the good guy in it .

Amazing stuff. The story telling is top notch here and the sex is alluring.

Would love to see a continuation of this, with Teri and maybe even Dominique getting involved.

Love this tale, I've read it at least a dozen times. Total male fantasy, but sweet and lovely.

One of the Best Here . I have read this Story many Times

Your one of my favorites and this story is, IMO, your best. My only complaint is you don’t write as much as you used too. Miss your works man hope to see you writing more often.

It was a long drawn out story but I followed it to the end. It was a good well riten story and I enjoied it perhaps a little shorter in the sex scenes would have bean nice but still wedone

good story. only suggestion is not to many me /boys could cum that much and get that many erections in 36 hours..also too many girls and relationship twists. I still dont know who Terry is in the context of girlfriend category. still good resding

Happy sexy adventurous outrageous fun ridiculous, and did I say sexy story? I would like more, as soon as you can deliver. I feel as indebted to you as all the girls felt to Alex

I loved all 4 chapters. Call me a geek but I just love a big, thick and meaty book. Keep it up! I would love to see how Alex's sexuality continues to grow and effect others around him. Might be fun for Miss Shannon to snag a bisexual boyfriend so Alex can become bi curious if he hasn't already. Awesome work and totally believable

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Loved the characters and the consistency of their portrayal. Outrageous circumstances, but not totally beyond believability: close enough to a reality that I could see myself there. I am sad they have to go home, and can not wait for further adventures.

This was amazing story. Can't wait to read more. Next chapter please, want to see when Teri give her cherry to Alex.

Great story, each character has a personality. As you know there are a lot of threads that were started but not finished. We all want more.

As a former Boy Scout, an Eagle, this was a great story!

As a man, this was an out of the world fantasy!

As a dedicated perv, this was one HELLUVA story that blew my mind!

Well done and yes, do more!

This is only the introduction to the series, I hope! A great introduction to the characters, followed by letting the characters get to know themselves and each other for actually the first time. So many characters and combinations. I'm hoping to read a lot more as the weekend relationships mature and settle. And Teri and Heather and John and Dominique... Hmmm...

-Skintickler

Left this as Anonymous because it's only letting me enter 4 digits of the security code when I attempt to sign in.

P.S. Alex badly needed to pee, he didn't "need to pee badly".

Can’t get the sleeping bag swap out of my head, that was so over the top erotic, Hot action, and to make the ultimate good guy/ stud muffin was a masterful stroke. Thank you once again.

Only had one h.s. teacher all four years I'd have considered doing! She wore shear pantyhose with no panties! Know that not because pulled an Alex with her but because "A" frame minis were in style and she wrote stretched out to write on the top of the blackboard! Was glad none of the girls in the class told her about the exposure!

Enjoyed the series!

This is one of the most enjoyable stories I've read on Literotica! Ever! More please!

Why is dr reed shown contempt ?

Need more of Terri and Julie and then continue it to college with Julie and marriage

I kinda want a sequel where Shannon and Mr. Hamilton are either married or in a poly relationship with a kid and just how that would work out. Sexy to me

I gave this Chapter 5 stars. That is for the complete story. The other 3 chapters I gave 4 stars. While I know a prequel won't have sex in it (unless Alex saves Miss Shannon from someone) it would be nice to see how Teri, John and Miss Shannon become friends with Alex. You gave a nice tease on Teri and Miss Shannon. How old is Miss Shannon. Also, it would be nice to know what happens once they are back to school. I know how HS can be. Once everyone sees Alex with the sisters there will be roomers. Also, Is Julie in 11th grade? Since everyone should be 18+ how is her sister still in HS? Loved the story!

I'd like to hear more about Miss Shannon. What other stories and/or backstroke does she have?

Outstanding. Oh to be young again. Thanks for the great story.

More!!

A well written story with great development. Now we need more. Does Alex navigate the start of a polyamourous life? Do they become a foursome when college starts? Does Teri give Alex her Virginity? More stories on this please.

You didn't finish the story. That's why you can't get more than 2 stars in my book.. you should have finished the story with TerI giving Alex her virginity. Without that the story iant complete. To me they seemed like there was real love there. This story would have been worth more than 5 stars if it wasn't prematurely ended.

I know you said Scout's Oath is a stand alone story but come the fuck on.... What happened in between man? Please tell the rest lol

Please give us more. Another camping trip. Or school after. A pre story about the teacher or something.

A well written story with an actual plot and most amazing of all, not everyone had 12 inch cocks and DD boobs.

I will chime in with some others that I'd love to read about the return to school or even the graduation summer trip.

but where is the folow up? its been a couple years so im guessing no more alex and the girls.

4* because the story is incomplete otherwise it would have been 5*

I like how you built up the story and it didn't get straight to sex

nice fleshing out the characters too.

Please continue this guys story. I'd like to know what transpires when they all return to school life.

My favourite cast of characters in all of literotica. Please please please write more!

I hated - then this one saved your neck ! Scotty

Can't quite figure out if you're still actively writing stories--but I hope so! I loved this story, and many others you have on this site. Please write more! Or if you've published elsewhere, please point me there!

I've read and reread this series several times and it keeps on amazing me! Please continue the series, there are many more places it can go, with Teri, with Dominique, with the sisters and at the same time, it can continue with camping or other outdoor adventures...You have done a brilliant job with this a your other series! Look forward to reading more of your work! Thank you for sharing your talent with us all!

I thought he was in love with miss shannon, wonder if they still see each other

Wow - that's all I can say - I'm ready to go camping - lol

I.. I need more. SEQUAL PLEASE something where he finally gets Teri. With the sisters there of course. Hell even miss Shannon

Your ending comments are tantalizing. Early relationships with Miss Shannon? Pray tell more! or the three girls he had pre camp!

This could be a great start to a sensational series. Loved the scenario...loved the introduction to all the characters. Written like a pro. I can just fantasize about Alex and his final year in school. Loved (as all men do) the interplay of the women in this story. Wonder if a bi-guy might even be on your mind and introduced somewhere and sometime. Perhaps his current triangle of lovers and Alex might like that ?? Who knows but only you as the author can make that choice. Great job !!!!!

That was really awesome, i enjoyed myself many times in a small amount of time but the writing was really good. i enjoyed getting to know the characters and their relationships together tremendously, this is easily in my top 3 favourite short stories and erotic stories. I quite hope you come back to it ( i admit, it would be nice to see something with teri and alex, or just more post alex ) But thank you :) it was a great

i hope you add teri's deflowering by alex to that list

This was published 3 hears ago.

I have read all four of them at least three times and I still have not seen any more of them.

An Eagle keep his word.

Please, a couple, or more, in this year (2016).

Ah, the memories your stories bring back to me.

THANKS!

Very interesting story with great characters. Please write some more chapters or another novella to follow this storyline.

Is Scouts Oath a part of this series?? The lead male is Alex Hamilton and there is a Heather as well. Really would like to see what else you have to add to this series. 5 stars!!

you said you had a couple stories floating around about some of these characters? I would love to read them if you were willing to share

Please write more stories like this. I searched everywhere, but did not get this particular combination of umm fantasies. This particular combination is one of a kind. Sisters, teacher, girlfriends, camping. Wow. More please!!!

You need to finish the threads like the first time with Teri

Am I to assume this is the end of the series? Hope not, reading by your comments you "have other works your committed to?" It's been 3 years, is "The Last Boy Scout" finished?

Tx... If I'd have a hand in writing I'd only wish to be half as good as you because being as good as you is almost blasphemy

I loved all the characters in this series. The story itself was great and actually had plots going; great job! You have so many options on how you want to build on this series. I'd love to read about prequels and sequels...PLEASE write more on:

1. The history between Alex, Miss Shannon, and John...how did they meet? How did ur sexual tension start between Alex and Shannon? Etc.

2. Teri. I wanna know if she loses her virginity to Alex.

3. Dominique. I wanna know if he ends up fucking her til her eyes roll back and she gets crew pied like a sexy slut you e built her up to be

almost too many options.

Teri is one unanswered question.

What happens with Miss Shannon at the end of the year?

How do the sisters cope in the real world?

John and Dominique?

Max and Wendy?

no one cares about Dr. Dan

Can the boy scout survive with all the attention?

an enquiring mind wants to know.

Keep writing this story with these characters, ESPECIALLY Teri. I fell in love with these characters and Jesus give me writing lessons because even the parts that weren't making my cock leap into the air were written beautifully.

DONT STOP WRITING

Great story but you need to keep it going

I meant to hit the favorite story link and accidentally voted 3 stars instead. This is definitely worth 5 stars in my opinion.

Man, I cannot get enough of your stories. They are an inspiration. This story deserves to be explored further, definitely was looking forward to seeing Teri lose her virginity and was a little disappointed that it didn't happen. Either way, my hat's off to you good sir. Keep up the good work.

PLEASE write another chapter, or three!! By far the best erotic story I've ever read. But I have to know happens with Teri - I simply fell in love with her! ....along with Julie...and Lisa...and Heather...and fuck it - I love 'em all!! :)

Attention to the little details, in depth about the sex scenes.

Easy to forget you aren't reading a novel with the characters and sub plots.

Truly a great read and added to favourites

more please?????????????

As usual another great story. Would love to see a continuation of this story maybe what happened with Alex and the sisters or between Alex and Teri, with so much left hanging it could go anywhere.

Look forward to more of this story and reading more of your stories on here.

But your ending sucked so much left hanging!!!!

I wish you would write about teri.

I keep rereading. More please!

Absolutely loved it. Completely over the top but so what? It is a great erotic story.

Very nice work.

I truly enjoyed this whole story. Alex is a really likable person and I would like to see more about him and his girlfriend. Not to mention his bestie. Please write another series about these characters.

Please add more to his adventures following this story. What happens next to him.

Thank you for this tale. Its an enjoyable read.

I could not stop reading! Please, please write more. I would love a continuation of this storyline, or, if you feel so inclined, head off into a new direction.. I eagerly await...........

You are truly a prince of all authors.

Just finished reading the four chapters in one session. I couldn't stop reading! I really enjoyed the story and I look forward to more (please!)

Thanks!

The best series I have read on this site, hands down. Please please please write more about Alex, and the twins, and Miss Shannon! :) maybe a side story about Dominique and John?

I've never left a comment before, but with this story I feel like I have to. The story was so sweet, and hot, and... I don't know.. almost perfect! It's not just some dirty story which you read and then felt ashamed and uneasy, on the contrary, this story cheered me up, besides I enjoyed myself quite a few times during reading the series). Thank you very much! You rock!

Thank you very much for this amazing story. I can't thank you enough for keeping John and Max out of it as much as you did, with John only kissing Teri and "stealing" Dominique away from the party. You may call me a hypocrite or whatever but while I like the sharing between girls I don't like sharing between guys in these kinds of stories. One guy - more than one girl - that's how I like the Group Sex genre.

If you ever get around to another installment of this series - I would personally really like to see Alex and his new girlfriends and 'other' new friends in their natural setting - perhaps set like a month or so after this. Them together at school, sneaking away during recess and lunch for some fun (especially hot doing it with the teacher at school) and even after school and weekends. And, again, if I could urge you to keep involvement of other males in any follow-up chapters to a minimum? :)

Anyways - 5/5 series, easy. Also really great work with not only this series but Gamer Goddess series as well, and first chapter of Two Moms, Two Laps.

This storyline is one of the better ones I've read on here, you should continue with this as if seems that you've only just touched the tip on what is a great tale.