All Comments on 'The Last Princess of Lorrea Ch. 12'

This story was very good at the beginning but now i am really disappointed.

Waiting for the next chapter was so hard but I enjoyed the addition thoroughly. Thqnks for sharing your talents!

Wow that was intense!!! Thanks longlegs!! Cant wait for the next one

I am impressed by Chap 12 and eagerly await Chap 13. Thank you for continuing this tale.

Poor Tristan

That's long legs now off my Xmas card list :-)

Lovely story and it will be interesting to see what you do with it next

Too small.. Unnecessary mention of all that fight between henry and caspian.. Totally stretched one there.. But then it turned good once whn he came home wid her...

Its not the plot.. Its the no of pages tat i am disappnted with.. You promised 3 😤

I had a hard time getting into ch 11, but 12 was very compelling. Can't wait for the next part.

i loved this wtg can't wait for more hopefully we don't have that long of a wait

Loved this chapter. I'm addicted, so please don't make us wait too long for chapter 13. And if you could, please make it longer.

*bright smiles*

So very glad that Henry was able to rescue her just before Caspian could get her pregnant!!!! Great chapter. But one question, did she ever recover her necklace? Anyhow, loved this chapter and looking forward to seeing how Henry and Elena will rebuild their relationship after her brutal rape and deflowering. Keep up the awesome writing and story line. *grins*

I have a feeling that Henry will recover the necklace and the Elena will slowly fall for him.

the brutal rape of Elena. It will be interesting to see how the relationship between Henry and Elena changes after this and whether this will strengthen their relationship or destroy it.

This is better than some books I have read. Very Very good. Can't wait for 13

So happy Caspian is dead hang his corpse in the center of town

It's been 10 days since ch. 12. Please I'm dying here from withdrawal symptoms. I don't think you want a dead corpse on your conscience, do you? Please you have just got to post chapter 13 NOW! ;)

I'm having a little trouble with the flow of the next chapter. Usually I can sit for a few hours and type out a few pages, but at the moment it takes me an hour just to write a paragraph. What I'm trying to say, is that you lovely people will have to be a little more patient than usual.

I could post just one page - but where's the fun in that?

Can't wait for the next chapter!

.. and cool quips from Caspian, shame he's dead (or is he..?), he is the lead male after all (that IS a twist!) it seemed he had a real thing for Elena, with lots of violent baggage and defensive name-calling, of course... and bless little Henry, he's so sweet and silly, trying in vain to control the situation :) and managing to not feel much anger at all regardless of how he caught them :)... interesting story.. looking forward to seeing what's next... i'm all confused about your thinking now (in a good way), as I first thought you were pitching Henry as the lead male, then Caspian, but now I think it might be poor Henry after all... nice one. xx

This is torture how long are you going to make us wait?????

It seems as though my muse has gone on vacation.... writer's block. But don't worry, I haven't abandoned this story!

I've typed out 7 pages (google doc- don't get too excited... probably ends up as one page here on lit), seems that the muse has returned and I have a clearer sense for the plot now.

Yessss finally!! :D ahhhh can't wait, miss this story.

Let the countdown begin! (although, you can't really countdown when there is no clear date right?)

Now if you'll all excuse me... I need to catch up on sleep.

Whoot

We know that it will not normally be longer than 7 days before the next chapter makes its apperance.

Please post something, dont care if its one page, i want to know moreee

This is turning out to be a romantic story..May be in future you could write a parallel story, instead of Cavlian as so animalistic and getting killed, Cavlian forcing her and finaly Elena ending up with him . Just a thought..after all, Cavlian is her first...first touch, first fuck...That would also be a great story.

Story has a lot going for it, except for a heroine with brains. Elena is frustratingly dumb and gullible, which makes it hard to care about her. Well written though.