All Comments on 'The Last Ride'

Powerfully written. I have recently discovered your work. Your are a feast for my eyes. Thank you

Definitely non-erotic…and quite dark. Though well written, all the shadows made it difficult to discern the MC’s personality well enough to feel a lot of empathy.

Poor writing style is distracting. Trying to be edgy and cool only comes off as vague and pretentious. Maybe get an editor to keep you from hitting the curbs and guardrails...