All Comments on 'The Last Scene'

by GreenandGolden

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PurplefizzPurplefizzover 2 years ago

Just an observation from having spent a small amount of time around the movie industry, anyone in front of camera at 8am will normally be woken at 4am and in the make up dept at 5-6am latest. I’m guessing Sophie & James won’t be making their call then…

That aside it’s a good chapter of an ongoing story, probably chapter 2 given the fact there very little scene setting, if you write a follow up I’d concentrate on the romance and not everything else if that’s the category you’re shooting for. Good luck, thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

LunaScarletLunaScarletover 2 years ago
Glad you're back!

This was super hot, and I believe a part 2 is in order! Your characters always have the best chemistry!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Duh! Movie Body Doubles don’t get lines to speak! They don’t have the same voice as the lead actress.

GreenandGoldenGreenandGoldenabout 2 years agoAuthor

Err DUH anon. They usually still speak the lines if there are any to help with continuity for the other lead. The actual lead will then be edited back in for the final cut. Ta

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spyraloutspyraloutabout 2 years ago

Fun and sexy story! Thanks for writing. I agree a second part is in order. I'd love to hear about the shoot. Do they sneak in some authentic loving on camera now that they have done it for real?

irvingsmusingsirvingsmusingsover 1 year ago

Absolutely loved your story. So hot!

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