by darkestcloud
One of the best On the net. It was tender,,it was loving, it was so fucking hot. It should have only started with this, not ended.. 5*
A tremendously well crafted story that was both tender and erotic. I not only felt like I knew both Jess and Doug, but more importantly, I wanted to know them. Yet another excellent and moving piece by darkestcloud.
Yours Truly,
AuralStimulation
Bravo on a well written piece. This is my first review on this site and that says a lot. There is nothing better than a man who understands how to please a woman. The young lady reminds me of myself at that age, it was always better sex with the older men. Thank you and please continue to write more. Mmmm yes please!
I was as soaked the second time reading it as I was the first. Truly erotic and beautiful storytelling and writing.
That is a sensationally good story. Such depth in the characters - you brought their intrigue and lust for life and each other to life. Thoroughly enjoyed it and considering hanging out in coffee shops by Universities from now on - just in case I get lucky :) Thank you for your story - I really ook forward to you sharing more of your dreams and thoughts.
Thanks for a great story, made even better by the fine writing.
I really enjoyed this story, nice to see a younger woman enjoying an older man. Us old fellas know how to treat a woman properly!
Very sexy, love the two lovers. Two people sharing each other which I was one of them. ;)
Delightfully sweet story of sharing between generations without the usual stupid inhibitions and empty morality that usually accompanies sexuality between younger and older adults. Thank you! Please, write more!
A wonderful fantasy for an older gentleman. Well written and nicely erotic. Thank you.
Thank you for sharing your talents, darkestcloud. This story is well written, beautiful and so sexy!!!.