All Comments on 'The Last Wallace'

This is an incredibly well written story - a Hallmark Christmas story with a touch of literotica. Great Characters. Well done

Excellent story and well written

This one was a thrill to read. No soap box drama and angst, just pure love in the end.

Sets me pondering, who is going to succeed Ellie (and her half sister) as the next heirs to Wallace Town? Aw shucks. I just forgot, it's all just a fantasy of MajorRewrite.

Very cute Christmas story. Not much hot action though.

Enjoyable read nevertheless.

Cheers

I see this story as a multi-faceted one. Yes, lesbianism is a part of it. There are also strong family values present as is the love of our fellow man and the concept of sharing with those whom are less fortunate. The timing of the release couldn't have been better as we quickly approach Thanksgiving. Great story (5/5 from hetero male)!!

One of the best, the sex was good but not dominating the story. It was well written.

10/10

That was amazing

One reader wondered who would be the next heirs to Walkville after Ellie. In my mind, she would have a child or two to continue the family line. There would never be an opportunity for Daria to have children that could inherit, because it would mean exposing Daria and Ellie’s incestuous relationship. If Ellie decided not to have children, I think she’d hire the best lawyers and try to change the terms of the Trust so she could eventually give Walkville to a nonprofit rather than letting it go to auction when she dies. Thanks to all of you for your interest!

I liked the story a lot. Linda weighed there was more, I'm wondering what will happen to Walkville and Ellie in the future.

I actually enjoyed the hell out of reading this. Beautiful is a word that’s over used, until something like this comes along to justify that very word.

My thanks that the idea for this came to you, and you put the time in to write it.

Fantastic and amazing too!!!

Absolutely fabulous happy storey! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I 100 percent agree with a comment about it being Hallmark (my girlfriend only plays Hallmark during the holidays) but you gave it the Literotica touch it needed, especially in the incest taboo category. 5 stars and favorite

I would like to have a follow up story.

Thanks

Never thought I would read a Halmark story here but it works so well done!

You should make this a series. I’d like to hear a lot more about Ellies and Darias life and adventures. Loved this story, thank you for writing it.

This has got to be the very best incest/taboo story here on Literotica that I’ve ever read! I generally get a bit bored with lesbian stories, being a male and liking to read male/female interaction, but the writer kept it interesting and fun. I especially liked the setting of a whole town without cars. How much better would our country’s towns and cities be if they were all this way?

And then the ending where Ellie decides not to sell the property, to the delight of all. I found tears in my eyes! The story composition was excellent and it soothed this radical environmentalist’s heart! And I could find absolutely no typo’s in the text. That’s phenomenal for writers in this genre! Too often there are a LOT of typos, misspellings and basically poor grammar. This was professionally written and I give cheers to the author! Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to more from you!

Loved it!! Five stars and a favorite point!

Wonderfully written piece! I can't knock the overall story arc, but in the whole scheme of things I would have taken the story arc in a different direction. I would have had a male and female, but same circumstances as the feature. Just easier to continue the Wallace line, something that would be a follow-up to this tale. (Yes, I know they could have children, but it would be a complicated plot to manipulate and keep readers engaged.) Just my two cents and what's wrong with Hallmark stories? LOL! 5*

This was a touch of sweetness, that I really needed. Not the source I expected to find something like that... But highly appreciated.

Very well written! It’s a great story that, obviously toned down a bit, would easily make it as a cable tv holiday show.

It’s really great as a stand alone story, but something is saying it begs for a sequel to extend the Wallace family line. It’s certain your call but I’d be reading it if you did!

This is the first story of yours that I’ve read, now I need to check out your others. Thanks!

Fantastic story.

Well written and I am sure all who read will enjoy.

I can see more chapters with the mother and father getting together and , well I am sure you can add much more.

Thank you for this FIRST chapter

one of the best stories ive ever read, please write more.

This is one of, if not the best, story I've read on Literotica. Great job and please continue.

Terrific story, and I don't read seven pagers!

I liked this one and gave if five stars!

But two years ahead, we need men in these Ladies lives, and either the death of Daria's stepdad, or a confession that he's always known she wasn't his.

We need some boys and girls to build the future!

Excellent story. Well written, well edited. Believable characters. An easy 5 star rating.

I don't want to come across as a broken record repeating others' comments, but this is one of the best stories I have read on this site in a while. Thank you.

EXCELLENT, 5 Stars isn't enough but it's all I can do! A truly great story, with loving, and nice characters, who just happen to also be tall, thin, small-titted, beautiful lesbians... Having great sex all day long!! A very Merry Christmas story!!

A nice Christmas tale filled with like able characters.

Personally not fond of lesbian stories as a rule, but this was very well written and a great ride. Obviously 5 stars.

Wheres their brother to knock them up and keep the Wallace family moving forward? He should definitely be an ex Delta Force operator with a massive cock and already rich from his unknowing cuckolded father so he won't use up the Wallace fortune.

If you continue the story find a way to bring another generation to the Wallace family. Good story and I am being sarcastic about the brother part.

Merry Christmas to all!

Well played MajorRewrite! Some mild typos but, nothing "Major". I had to do that...

As anonymous said 3 days ago:

Personally not fond of lesbian stories as a rule, but this was very well written and a great ride. Obviously 5 stars.

My sentiments exactly. There was enough balance between the sisters and the business of the town that made it interesting and a good read.

Great story! Thanks for sharing it with us. Cheers. Frankie

This was such a grea read

Great story with a lovely Christmas gift at the end. Would love to live in this town.

I would love to read the next installment?

I’m willing to believe both of these sweet women live long and productive lives

But one (or both) of them needs to give birth to the next Wallace generation

Sequel Needed

Unbelievably well written. 5 out of 5.

Exceptional, what a neat story! Brilliant characters and interesting plot. Thanks for writing this story. I hope you choose to continue with additional chapters. A significant inheritance does make life much more interesting.

I agree that there should be a follow up. Why can't a lesbian (by then married?) couple have kids? Artificial insemination is an option...

Also, if Ellie's mom and Daria's dad get romantically involved, he could obviously not expect her to move out of her home in Walkville, and that would also resolve the trailer issue...

I'd love a follow-up/continuation...

Nice story, well written,positive, and enjoyable.

Please let your readers know what happens next!

-jog

1st lesbian story I ever read to the end. Just kept my interest. Maybe it was the lil’ red head.

I've read a few of these "suddenly outrageously rich" stories on Literotica. They read well but the truth is they are too easy. Just an expanded version of "If I won the lottery." Don't get me wrong, this story is well written and enjoyable to read.

Is there going to be a sequel?

please write more stories of these people.

Lovely story you need to continue with Elli's story

The best story on this site!

AMAZING Story..!!! Great 5 stars ..!!

Needs additional chapters - like what would happen if Ellie's mom and Daria's dad were to get together as a couple?........?????

Excellent,

Closest thing of heard of in real life was Hershey, Pennsylvania and how the Hershey chocolate company/family grew the town.

Loved it

I liked the first couple pages and then.

Just a beautiful story! Well done and thank you.

Really really touching!

I needed a story like that. Thank You!

A very great 5 star tale. Amazing!

Heartwarming without being treacle like. Well done 🐷.

Bill S.

Virtually in tears at the end, beautiful story, best that I have read for a very long time.

I am not into lesbian stories, but the background story made this a brilliant read and the lesbian erotica was well written. The story felt like a movie playing in my head with the drama, emotion and not forgetting the picture of two young venus' writhing in pure ecstasy. Thank you was the best story I read in a while, deserves to receive an award of some kind.

This needs to be continued, about ten or fifteen years down the track.

Excellent story.

I know she’s young and has plenty of time.

But…

There needs to be another (some others) Wallaces to continue caring for the town.

Another great story by a talented author. An author who actually writes stories that hold appeal for me. The stories are original and even though the plots are way out there and totally fairy tale stuff, the characters are so real and believable and relatable. It all makes for enjoyable reading.

These stories are most definitely not just a mere mish-mash of rehashed regurgitated worn out tropes.

Thank you.

This story was absolutely heart warming in every way. It could be added too and made into a movie on the “W” channel. (Romance Chanel). It is that good, So heart filling.

It was truly was one of the best stories I’ve read.

Thank you for the effort you put in this. 💕

Steve.

A good story, well conceived and well written with some great romantic moments. Would love to know how the Wallace Trust survives?

A truly beautiful story!! Thank you!!

Espetacular sou seu fã.

Parabéns

Right now it is mid-September. Nowhere near Christmas but getting closer. Story brought tears to my eyes. Beautifully written, but I almost felt it was too short. Maybe I just wanted the good warm feeling to stay a bit longer. Thanks.

un cuento de hadas xxx.

Totally different, which was a lot of fun. Nice people. Slow steady development. Just a sweet story. I'm not usually a soft touch for a sappy story but this was very good

Very good story, well written and edited, possibly even better than Hallmark Channel or W Network stories. I'd like to see he story continue with other Wallaces, perhaps another, younger, male, surprise half sibling, since little was said about Jeffrey's behavior after he fathered Daria. 5/5, even though the story needs closure.

These lesbian stories are boring and not very spicy to me not out there far enough,

It was pretty much like life. First kind of knowing more and more of each caracter. Than the hot and spicy thing, pure passion and lust. In the last part It was love between the girls and extended to their parents and the towns people. Lovely story. Sometimes gentle and soft and often lustfull and hot. Congrats

With the discovery of Daria there are now TWO Wallace family members alive so technically she can no longer sell Wallace Town. I wonder how many other half-sibs the two girls have given Jeff's philandering ways.

This has to be one of the sweetest most romantic stories I’ve read. Loved the references and side stories to “It’s A Wonderful Life”.

Fantastic story, Very well written and plenty of room for a second chapter someday

Awesome love story

And despite being two girls, they *should* think about kids... It's Ellie's duty to make sure there's more generations of Wallaces to maintain the town...

Just one question... Is it Wallace Town or Walkville? Or is Walkville a part of Wallace Town specifically?

Another fantastic, detailed, creative, sexy, fun story!!! You are so talented. Loved this from start to finish. This is another of your stories that would make a fantastic movie!!!! Thank you so much for the read!!!

Beautiful story, well done. Would love to hear more with this one! they make such a amazing couple. Thank you for it!!

This one was tough to rate. While I love this author's work, and I find the style and attention to editing exemplary, I found the beginning of the relationship between Daria and Ellie to be a little rushed, and it broke the smooth flow of the story for me. Everything else was great. The dialogue was wonderful, the story had the requisite three acts, and above all it had romance by the bucketful. In spite of my caveat above, I loved it and gave it five stars.

I absolutely loved this story. Wishing for a part 2