All Comments on 'The Late Bloomer Pt. 02'

by IAmAllThatIsMan

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PH4R40HPH4R40Hover 1 year ago

Will this continue? I sure hope so! Maybe a jump into the future where their inbred son is fucking his grandmother/mother

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
Without the meanness

Autobiographical.

dnick47dnick47over 1 year ago

I thought it was a great story. Hope you continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hope there is a next part; with her baby bump now showing.

JobewonJobewonover 1 year ago

Fantastic!!! Wold love to read more if you continue this storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Completely lost me when you full on went for the "wimp father/studly son" cliche.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The sadism and humiliation isn't my kink. 1*

A shame because it was hot before it went in a direction I couldn't enjoy.

OOAAOOAAover 1 year ago

Very HOT!!!! 5 stars!

Marvin2017Marvin2017over 1 year ago

Nah. Ok at first, not this chapter, tho…

SiodisSiodisover 1 year ago

Gotta bring in more family members: Aunts, cousins, sisters?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love it! Do more evil incest like this. Have you ever considered a story where a hot alpha mommy steals her son back and cuckqueans his girlfriend/fiancée/wife? Steals her chance at her son's firstborn from her and births mommy births her own grandchild?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very nice story gave it 5 stars!

Xavier3737Xavier373712 months ago

It was great until the humiliation of the husband/dad came into play. Should have just had the husband leave without even finding out about anything and then had other female relatives come over and play...

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Hope we get more M/S stories like this from you - deliciously wicked.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19817 months ago

So it seems to me your another one of those writers who actually thinks what you projected in this story is what a man is across the borad however this story is like many others it didn't have a man in it at all it just had a bunch of bitches even your so called bull in the story wasn't a man he was another bitch who is a wannabe man however his true colors would show when faced with a real man

LadyLoreLadyLore3 months ago

You really don't know what a alpha male or beta male is do you the husband in this story wasn't a beta because he wasn't dominant at all he was a submissive he wasn't even a true submissive and the son wasn't a alpha either for a alpha doesn't just takes what he wants a alpha will protect those around him just like a beta will protect those around him as well as protect the alpha because a lot of times the beta is more dominant than the alpha either way an Alpha just doesn't take he cares for and protects those around him and weaker then he is he does everything a man would do this story didn't have a alpha nor a beta the closest thing it had was a submissive and not even a true submissive for that matter it did however have a cheating slut a wannabe little boy who would tremble before a man and cuckold who isn't a man

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