All Comments on 'The Law of Attraction Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Well it was great while it lasted!

You Had a great T.G. story here and then you turned her into a G.G. Just stopped reading after that.

Sorry I loved your story up till then.

But hey you can't please everyone.

Still love your work though.

hottchichottchicover 12 years agoAuthor
Anonymous, I understand where you are coming from but...

I do say at the start of every chapter, 'This is a transexual fantasy'

If you read my previous series 'Tits Have Benefits', you might have the expectation that the end result of this transformation would be to stop at being a shemale, but then again my other series 'Fiona and Ariel' under Lesbian sex is about a lesbian relationship between two GGs.

In a sense I think that if I had stopped at Jamie being a shemale in one sense I would have written a story that I have already written, I'm sorry this story didn't do it for you.

chimpeechimpeeabout 10 years ago
ITS GETTING HOTTERE & HOTTER

I don't know were this is going to go I've just cum again this is hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
wishes

Wow i just shot some cum so hard mmm wish i could have that happen to me love to have a wet pussy instead of my little boi clit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

As a trans person, this story makes me lowkey euphoric. Although it kinda hurts knowing this kind of thing can't happen

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