All Comments on 'The Law of Jungle Ch. 02'

Kanjakumari is getting better and better. Literary perfection, intimate love rituals, whispers of love, pure eroticism, and the anatomy of the act of love has never been described so sensitively and realistically. This author is addictive! Body, mind and soul, everything is united here...

Thank you, dear author.

Mr.Anonymous,Thanx for your compliments.

its getting better and better . keep it up and add more nasty things .

Erotic plot but too much haste, from seducing to fu*king, & with such unnatural absurd instances,,, open peeing & in mouth , then becoming intimate the very next moment. Zero reluctance /inhibition? Babaji ka bracelet hai to Kuch v ???

Lol Aristrocrats ladies to depraved sl*ts ? Class difference should be portrayed all through out , that is what makes such stories arousing

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How can 1 who developes such appealing plot destroy it with absurdities in no time ... ???

A nice build up is more important than the "fu*k", ...take ur time fr the next episodes, ...

U hv the capabilities

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😍😍😍 LOVE IT kanyakumari007 😍😍😍

Now I understand why this story's name is THE LAW OF JUNGLE, What an amazing suspense buildup 👌

You are one of best writers on Literotica and touched every aspect of intoxication and lustfulness in your writing style that's why I check your page every week and wait for your update . . . . . 😋

but I also agree with one point of Anonymous, Ramu fucked Ashmita and next Madhu within 3 pages, It's too fast, You can go to slow seduction route!

Maybe this could lead to beyond 50-100+ chapters but it will really worth it and now You introduced another ALPHA MALE character Kallu so it opened a new door of exploration.

I sent a message through Instant feedback, I don't know You will receive or not !

but If You get it, Please try to mail me, I need to discuss something about a story !

Thanks kanyakumari007 🙏

Classy rich educated milfs banged by lowly old slum deweller .. 😋

But should have lured them slowly & realistically instead of both getting banged overnight ..

Now awaiting some tribal dwarf to eat them up

Great update....addictive.....but last 2-3 pages seemed hurried...... Overall very erotic and hot

Biggest protected area in india is Similipal National Park. ..2,750 km²

And this family went to a imaginary protected area with 3 times the area, 7000km2

This is grand romantic adventure story, with the wonderful atmosphere of a classic serial.