All Comments on 'The Law of Jungle Ch. 14'

Wow...loved that encounter of Asmita with the dirty old beggar....uff...too hot...

Keep writing

Thanks,Shrutisharma420.

Thanks,Mr.Anonymous for your feedback through Literotica.

One of the more remarkable aspects of The Law of the Jungle is the sheer scope of plot and characters. With chapter 14, the author takes the reader into uncharted territory, focusing this time on one main character throughout the chapter, and the result is stunning, a richly complex and moving story about Ashmita. As the drama unfolds, we see the development of Ashmita's character as she responds to various challenges, and the chapter concludes dramatically, with a "cliffhanger" ending that leaves the reader on pins and needles, waiting to find out what happens next. The depth of plot and characters in this chapter is matched by glorious love scenes that are beautifully written and serve at all times to advance the story, rather than be a hindrance to it. Five stars for outstanding story telling in all aspects.

Thank You @Anonymous, I was going to say thing about the story but You commented before me !

I am looking forward to see what will happen to other ladies, those going to trapped in this same situation,

Couldn't wait for NEXT chapaters, It will be your longest running story on Literotica @kanyakumari007,

All the best.

Looking forward to the next part with excitement.....

Great story

Waiting for next part

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE?

Waiting eagerly for part 15....it is one of the best Indian erotica on Literotica

Thanks,shrutisharma.

Waiting for the next part. It's the most amazing series

Hey can u tell the tentative date when will the part 15 of this story come?

I am waiting with excitement