by carvohi
I love this series!! It is a great story and you have written it very very well. Keep up the great work and don't ever quit writing YOU have a gift for it!!!!!
the other positive comments. I started this series three days ago and got to this point just now, YOU KNOW HOW TO TELL A STORY!
Very entertaining story but the rape is absolutely unwarranted, out of plot and character.
Also, getting Susan raped and abused by Cumulus, LOL, is a very poor plot device.