All Comments on 'The Legacy Ch. 02'

I hope you write more.

For your kind comment. I certainly intend to as time permits, sb.

I think the story is progressing well and I liked the introduction of her friend and thought it widened the possibilities of where the story could go. But the introduction of a lesbian relationship turned me off. It was a surprise and I don’t think it fits in with the path of the story unlike The Dutch Mistress scenario which was entirely different and fitted the story. It’s a pity you haven’t carried on with that series.