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Anonymousover 13 years agoWOW!!!
What a wonderful story! Quite amazing - 5*s and no mistake - thank you.
Anonymousover 13 years agoBrilliant
I particularly liked the interrogation scene. I did find it a tad long, but that is just my personal preference.
Anonymousover 13 years agoLong but great story
I kept hoping the story would go on and on and it did without being boring but exciting. You captured the characters perfectly.
Loved the ending. Thanks
Anonymousover 13 years agoDo they still teach grammar in grade school?
Grammar was terrible - their, there and they're mixed up, for starters (along with other super common mistakes) - and it went on and on with nothing happening.
Anonymousover 13 years agoIn a word .............. WOW!!!!!
what a story!! thank-you for sharing this talent!! :)
green2ballsover 12 years agoI like it but gash.
As a story it was really good(BUT) really tooooo long in one sitting, much to long for a contest.
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