All Comments on 'The Lesson'

Great job of writing. Especially love the female dominant / male submissive scenerio. Don't see to much of it here on Literotica since I think most stories in the BDSM arena are written by chavinist males. Please don't stop with just one story, I think you're very good.

Started out good (I was waiting to see him pay for being an ass) but just got dumb.

The sex is absolutely present, but it lacks any eroticism. There's no buildup. There;s no foreplay. There's no excitement at seeing/being seen, touching/being touched, kissing/being kissed. It's just wham-bam sex; zero to 60 in less than a second. Keep trying.

This could be th beginnings of a very sexy series of chastity and/or T&D play stories....My recommendation is to lock up his cock and sensually torture his balls while he watches his wife consistently be fucked by lovers with far more to offer her than he has.!

Went back into the bedroom and packed all his things and left her - forever. Who wants a slut? Idiotic story.