All Comments on 'The Letter'

Where's the ending ? It is a good story and I do like it BUT!!! AAA+++

Nice story!

I am in love with Benny. I can only hope Mom's tape #2 is an extended play. There has to be at least a second chapter.

Fucking fantastic story. I came twice while imagining myself and my 31 year old daughter in those roles.

I need the end of the story though

Rarely have I read a story that evoked so much emotion in me. This is a great start. Please keep it coming.

Excellent way to say a final farewell! And to share such Love with his Daughter is truly a dream come true! More please

Great story

Definitely needs to be continued

Excellent story. I have to say that I was surprised to see my hometown mentioned. I grew up in Davison

Fuck. That was hot. What a wonderful build-up! 5 stars!

The idea was great and it started good, but to the end it got too long-winded and a little boring.

GREAT!!!

Hot

Holy cow… terrific…. Great love story.

Good story, but now for the critique: Needs some proofreading as there were grammatical errors - Didn't the player need batteries after so long an inactive period? - Given her dad's initial fragile emotional state, he seemed to acquiesce to the sexual situation rather too quickly where a subtle segue is called for - I wish you had stayed with the adult expression of 'mom' and 'dad' instead of denigrating to the juvenile form of 'mommy' and 'daddy' - at this point 'cunt' rather than pussy does not seem appropriate to the tempo of the story line -