All Comments on 'The Letter'

No defense of the guy but sometimes we cannot see what is standing before us. I hope the girl eventually found love down the road!

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It felt like I was the one writing this. Well done.

Beautifully written. Makes me want to be Gary.

Great job with this letter. It shows a real vulnerability along with a reluctance to take risk being overcome by love. I felt sorry for her as she told of the roommate and friends’ teasing but perhaps that was the catalyst that Gary needed, seeing them tease her, to understand how he felt about her and how he wanted to be different with her. Now I’m going to bookmark that story for a future read since I don’t remember reading it before. Great job, 5*.

Lovely! Thanks for your contribution to the event :)