All Comments on 'The Library'

It’s a fine line to tread between Dominant and abusive arsehole. He’s clearly into humiliation and that can be thoroughly enjoyable if that’s what gets you off but there wasn’t enough beyond the ‘good girl’ to determine whether or not he’s a sexy Dom or a creep.

My imagination is currently running with the sexy Dom because I’d prefer to give the benefit of doubt.

There are inconsistencies in your story, in the library aisle he is behind you then suddenly you are facing him without noting it in the story, in the conference room, he has you tied up on the table so how are you able to drop to your knees? A DOM would not be so lenient when you couldn’t keep quiet, he would have punished you or left you high and dry to teach you a lesson. One doesn’t get to keep uttering sounds which would have gotten you caught by the way.

I don’t agree with the anonymous poster, he sounds just fine to me. Keep writing, I see promise in you as a writer, just need better editing.

It was amazing, really enjoyable. Please write more

Very enjoyable, would love to see more of your work.