by overrated117
... but the story got nothing from the fact Max is a billionaire.
I have never met a billionaire, never will. However, statistically @ list 99% of your readers cannot relate to a billionaires problems.
IF IT WASN'T FOR ABOVE ASPECT, I WOULD HAVE GIVEN YOU A 5 (*****).
The way it is, i will give you a 4+ [****+ (4.4/5 = 88%)].
Please keep on writing. Concentrate on BBW.
FULL-FIGURED WOMEN NEED MORE SEX THAN THE DLIM ONE, YET THEY GET MUCH MUCH LESS.
My favorite type is a married woman who is both rubenesque and statuesque; ideally she has a firm gate, & her flesh is firm. Her boss no longer fucks her, her husband does overtime & worries about his job so he fucks her once in a blue moon (if that)...
Big women love to be fuvked & they really need it.
Hell yeah! Exactly the type of woman I need in my life. Massive with a massive strap on. Bring on the next chapter!!!
I always thought this was a great premise for a story that did a great job of setting up its world and characters. Disappointed that it never got a second chapter. OP if you're reading this, write more! You're a great author!
Here´s also hope for a second part ;-)!
As one other comment already rightfully mentioned, the "world and characters" are very well and carefully designed - and my fantasies run wild with what this hell of a woman might be up to next :-D
I´m not into shrinking/giantess stories - so I especially like how the woman is very big and powerful, but just so that you can (wishfully, though ;-)) imagine such a body and character also existing in reality, if extreme genetics and other conditions perfectly fall into place.
Good work, thank you for the read :-)