All Comments on 'The Life of Ashley Joy'

Some obviously hasn’t seen Courtney since her last several rounds of plastic surgery. She looks like a duckbilled platypus now.

I couldn’t continue after this: “… her beautiful body sawing on 3 inch heals…”. You must have intended to write, “… her beautiful body swaying on three inch heels…”. “Indian” should begin with a capital letter. Since I stopped so soon, I spared myself from seeing what must be more such errors. You hold really find a competent proofreader.

Um, as the person said before, I bet if you get an editor. I know this story It will be better.