All Comments on 'The Lily Tattoo, Her Perspective'

A great build up...romantic...can feel the love between the two. I thought the dialogue between the characters was done well and the scenario and final consummation was all believable. Outstanding job!

Good job! Keep it up! *5*

This is a beautiful exploration of the needs of the girl, and to an extent of her dad.

Beautifully recounted. You have kept me up very late indeed tonight, most bewitching seductress...

Thankyou very much, what a fantastic story, well done, top marks.!!

Really excellent tale, very well written, and importantly, it was believable.

The emotions jumped right off of the page and dragged me into the story. You could feel genuine lust, love and wanting. Enthralling tale. Very very believable!! Well done